How to make a snowman
By ckrauss9536
Tuesday, February 21, 2012
I will tell you the steps to make a snowman
1) First you get a bunchof snow.
2) Then you make three difrint-sizd balls out of the snow. Medium Small and big.
3) Next you put the medium-sizd ball on the big ball.
4) Then you put the small-sizd ball on the medium-sizd ball.
5) Next you can add all the detales that you wont.
That is how you make a snowman!!!
By Caelan
Caelan, I really like how you used the Success Criteria to write your procedure. You remembered to include a title, introduction, numbered steps, connecting words, and a conclusion. Next time, it would be great if you could add more details to your steps. For example, what do you mean when you say, “add all the details that you want?” What details would you add?
Keep on blogging!
Love,
Miss Dunsiger
Caelan I like your procedure about how to make a snowman.
Caelan maybe on the weekend I could use your procedure to make a snowman.
Caelan I like how you incloded lots of writing and Caelan maybe I could show my mom about you doing a great job at writing.
Caelan maybe you could show your family of what a great writing you did please.
Thank you.
Madison