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Anwar I like your communities but maybe you could write why those are communities.
I agree with @mseo9448 about why they are communities and why those are communities, but you should start your sentence’s with something other then “we”. What do you think you could start with? Yusra
Anwar maybe you could write what the communities help us do.
Like hospitals help sick people. You could explain more, and that will increase your mark in communities. So think about that while you look over your writing, Anwar. So maybe if you used your prior knowledge about communities. Prior Knowledge means what you know about. Yusra
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